He is an ignorant child,
he's funny yes,
but offensive.
I know he does not wish to be,
but Allah is not something to joke about,
or how someone talks.
To many Allah is god,
and is to be respected.
I can't help but wonder,
if people make fun of him,
the ignorant child.
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To make fun of anothers god and how they talk, how digusting, why child, what makes you this way?
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sounds immature and without adequate rhythm.
diSgusting, I should say, but nice try! Keep up with the writing
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I've been waiting for something new.
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Look to the world with open eyes, find joy in the small things, you may be surprised.
but I'm not saying that you are immature.
But your poetry is.
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I've been waiting for something new.
"He is an ignorant child,
he's funny yes,
but offensive"
there's something that doesn't look good in these first lines. A rupture of sound?
Again, that's just my opinion, don't take it too seriously. If you can be toppled by a single opinion, you don't deserve to write poems anymore.
Keep up with the writing!!!
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I've been waiting for something new.
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Look to the world with open eyes, find joy in the small things, you may be surprised.
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Look to the world with open eyes, find joy in the small things, you may be surprised.
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I've been waiting for something new.
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I've been waiting for something new.
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